S.T.E.A.L. snapshot released

As promised, I put up a new snapshot of S.T.E.A.L. (available [here]({{ site.url }}/steal/steal.pdf)) Highlights include:

• Interpolated drawings. This should reduce the pixelation effect, but it will make them more blurry. I can’t fix this until Too sends me the actual art;

• Revisions throughout the text, to remove some parts where Yumiko acted out of character;

• A new part in New York, preparing the background for the more action-oriented parts that will follow;

Still TODO:

• Add more dialogue between Satsuki and Jim Clark, as the latter is an important character and now it looks underdeveloped;

• Revise some older parts that I haven’t looked at since they were written;

• Fix the question marks. This is actually a Kile bug with quotations;

• Of course, go on with the story!

I’m also trying to make a S.T.E.A.L. page, but I need to think about a design that’s not graphic-intensive. Suggestions are appreciated.